Tips for Writing an Effective College Essay

(from bigfuture by College Board)

When you apply to college, you’ll need to complete an essay as

part of your application. This is your opportunity to show admission officers who you 
are and to provide information about yourself that didn’t fit in other areas of your application. 
The essay also reveals what you can do when you have time to think and work on a 
writing project.

The number one piece of advice from admission officers about your essay is “Be yourself.” 
The number two suggestion is “Start early.”

Check out these other tips before you begin.

Choose a Topic That Will Highlight You

Don’t focus on the great aspects of a particular college, the amount

of dedication it takes to be a doctor or the number of extracurricular activities you took part in 
during high school.

Do share your personal story and thoughts, take a creative approach

and highlight areas that aren’t covered in other parts of the application, like your high school 
records.

Keep Your Focus Narrow and Personal

Don’t try to cover too many topics. This will make the essay sound

like a résumé that doesn’t provide any details about you.

Do focus on one aspect of yourself so the readers can learn more

about who you are. Remember that the readers must be able to find

your main idea and follow it from beginning to end. Ask a parent or teacher to read just your 
introduction and tell you what he or she thinks your essay is about.

Show, Don’t Tell

Don’t simply state a fact to get an idea across, such as “I like to

surround myself with people with a variety of backgrounds and interests.”

Do include specific details, examples, reasons and so on to develop

your ideas. For the example above, describe a situation when you

were surrounded by various types of people. What were you doing? Whom did you talk 
with? What did you take away from the experience?

Use Your Own Voice

Don’t rely on phrases or ideas that people have used many times

before. These could include statements like, “There is so much

suffering in the world that I feel I have to help people.” Avoid overly formal or business-like 
language, and don’t use unnecessary words.

Do write in your own voice. For the above example, you could write about a real experience 
that you had and how it made you feel you had to take action. And note that admission officers 
will be able to tell if your essay was edited by an adult.

Ask a Teacher or Parent to Proofread

Don’t turn your essay in without proofreading it, and don’t rely only

on your computer’s spell check to catch mistakes. A spell-check

program will miss typos like these:

·         "After I graduate form high school, I plan to get a summer job."

·         "From that day on, Daniel was my best fried."

Do ask a teacher or parent to proofread your essay to catch

mistakes. You should also ask the person who proofreads your

essay if the writing sounds like you.

Adapted from The College Application Essay by Sarah Myers McGinty.